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    Make Believe (Poem)

    Here's a poem I wrote a while back. Tell me what you think.

    Make Believe

    I’m tired of this place
    I’m tired of hiding myself away
    I’m tired of pretending it’s all alright
    I’m tired of hoping it will get better the next day

    Everyone thinks I’m happy
    I live in a world of rainbows and butterflies
    A smile always on my lips
    But they don’t know…

    Sometimes maybe I’ve even
    Tricked myself into believing
    That there’s no rain
    The sun always shines

    A coward is all I am
    I want to run from all this
    And try to forget
    Go on imagining that it’s all fine

    Maybe I’m the only one who sees it
    I can’t be the only one who knows
    She’s losing her mind…
    He’s dead…
    And they’re gone…

    I’ll be okay...someday
    The pain and tears will end
    This feeling that grips my heart will disappear
    And this make believe will cease to exist

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    Re: Make Believe (Poem)

    I love it I love it I love it!!! 10!
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    Re: Make Believe (Poem)

    hmph (concentrate)

    this poem is magnificent work
    how could make it rime perfectly?!?



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Make Believe (Poem)

    I really liked this poem. I can relate to it, or I could about a year back anyway. I enjoyed the good read. Write more! lol
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    A white rose no longer alone
    I know who's heart it is to represent
    I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
    For he's the one that's heaven sent. :
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