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makeup hides my feelings
makeup hides my face
so many layers of makeup
my true colors can't be traced.
feelings build up inside me
im ready to explode
i want someone to talk to
but no one sees my load
so i wash away the makeup
and show the colors true
i see that someone cares for me and makes me feel anew.-);):
Wow that was brilliant i hope you red my comment on your other poem but this one is the best so far keep it up, oh yes and i didnt expect that at all for your next one lol:laugh:
Cool! ^^ The mask theme- everyone of us wears a mask and it is an obtacle for people to get to know you and fall in love with the real you ^^ You show it in this poem, I love the way you kind of talk in riddles also changing the old thing- masks, to the new thing- makeup ^^
Nice work!!!! Waiting forward for the next one I am ^^
That was fantastic... Using makeup as a metaphore for a cover-up of feelings.. Simular to the concept of a mask. This was beautiful.
Peach and lasura i loves your poems can you write more poems anyone please i just love them!
thx 4 da compliments would u like more coming right up
Wow ....we remove the mask and become true person ...
nice one I like it ...so we should did not put makeup to the people to care of us ..nice job..
Beautiful really!!!!! I mean it's like your taking off something on your face and then your true beauty appears Your true personality!!! I just love your poems their so AMAZING!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!! :D: