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    Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Sonny Sunshine Champion, Volcano Champion, Aquarium Sprengischen Champion, Spiderman Web of Words Champion, Look Alive Champion iluvmyloser is off to a good start iluvmyloser's Avatar
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    Wink makeup

    makeup hides my feelings
    makeup hides my face
    so many layers of makeup
    my true colors can't be traced.

    feelings build up inside me
    im ready to explode
    i want someone to talk to
    but no one sees my load

    so i wash away the makeup
    and show the colors true
    i see that someone cares for me and makes me feel anew.-)
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: makeup

    Wow that was brilliant i hope you red my comment on your other poem but this one is the best so far keep it up, oh yes and i didnt expect that at all for your next one lol

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    Re: makeup

    Cool! ^^ The mask theme- everyone of us wears a mask and it is an obtacle for people to get to know you and fall in love with the real you ^^ You show it in this poem, I love the way you kind of talk in riddles also changing the old thing- masks, to the new thing- makeup ^^

    Nice work!!!! Waiting forward for the next one I am ^^

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    Re: makeup

    That was fantastic... Using makeup as a metaphore for a cover-up of feelings.. Simular to the concept of a mask. This was beautiful.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: makeup

    Peach and lasura i loves your poems can you write more poems anyone please i just love them!

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    thx 4 da compliments would u like more coming right up
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: makeup

    Wow ....we remove the mask and become true person ...
    nice one I like it ...so we should did not put makeup to the people to care of us ..nice job..

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    Re: makeup

    Beautiful really!!!!! I mean it's like your taking off something on your face and then your true beauty appears Your true personality!!! I just love your poems their so AMAZING!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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