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    Mama, standing by your gravestone,
    Mama, I feel so alone,
    Mama, I just don't know why,
    Because of me you had to die.

    If I hadn't tried crossing the street alone,
    Mama, maybe you'd be coming home,
    The truck was coming, headlights bright
    You felt- for me- you had to fight.

    Mama, you pushed me out of the way
    But you fell and on the ground you stayed,
    Then you were lying in the mud,
    Your pretty face obscured by blood.

    Mama, I swear, I tried to yell,
    So someone would come and help
    The man in the car with lights of red,
    Told me you were already dead.

    Later Daddy came and started to cry,
    Because we had to tell you goodbye
    And now, Mama, you're not here,
    To wipe my tears and calm my fear.

    Mama, I'm was only six years old,
    So it's hard to be bold,
    For a day would Heaven let you out
    So you could talk and walk about?

    Mama, I feel so alone,
    But, Mama, I hope you know
    Even as you lay beneath the cherry tree,
    Mama, you're a hero to me.

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    Oh my...what a touching story/poem @.@ it's so sad... :/ *sighs* is that based on your true or personal experience...cuz it sounds so real.. @.@ good job... i'll read more of urs from now on ^^

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    That was a beautiful poem Forgotten Soul...*wipes tear* that was really sad but very touching, keep up the good work and I can't wait to hear more!!

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    Wow so beautiful!!!! I loved every word of it! So descriptive and good emotions hope to see more!^^

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    How touching.... I like the poem. It reminds me of the song Spice Girls used to sing for Mother's Day! *smile* And so, the story for this poem is tragic too. -PEACE!-
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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