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    Cool Manga Idea : " Succubus "

    I know your getting ideas already.

    I will update this regularly ok.

    Prologue:

    " A misunderstood Succubus falls for someone not of there world of death and destruction. An inocent angel placed into the body of demon, she searches for a purpose. Will she learn how to love this shadow of a boy? Without running him off? "

    You will have too wait.
    (Got any ideas for me too add?)

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    Re: Manga Idea : " Succubus "

    hmm...
    a succubus is a sexual demon that seduces men in their sleep and steals their souls
    it sounds cool

    so I guess your succubus character will most likely be busty and/or cute (Chi from Chobits cute) considering her "job"
    and perhaps there will be a couple of succubus friends trying to stop her from her forbidden romance with the trapped angel
    hilarity, ecchi, and fanservice ensues
    and also a legion of angels trying to rescue him
    a clash against the demons who want to use the sealed angel/demon for their own purposes
    the power of holy
    fighting fire with fire and all that jazz
    a complex holy war just to save the "ultimate weapon" against God's armies: one of their own
    dun dun dun...
    or!
    you could just go with a Love-Hina/Tenchi-Muyo-type, romantic comedy
    hilarious misadventures and cuteness
    a bishounen (cute male anime character) character for your angel who transforms into a badass demon who is also bishounen
    and of course, fanservice and ecchi from your succubus

    good times
    I love my girlfriend.

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    Re: Manga Idea : " Succubus "

    Innerhell, tht's abt covers all possible scenario. LOL

    But you could add in tht the demon is already in love?

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Manga Idea : " Succubus "

    I will update this regularly if possible.

    But really the main character Mira (The Succubus) is on her first job, but she’s too caring too take the life of an innocent person to satisfy her commanding demons like her mother ( Seko (Pronounced Se-eko) After her brother (Serios (Pronounced SeR-Eahus) ) is forced to kill that person she loses her royalty in the family. She directs her attention to a high-school boy:
    Kera (Based on my personality of course)
    Age: 16 1/2
    Grade: 10 1/2
    The setting is in a hot Tokyo summer (of course).
    It will start off with the darkest scene I can possibly imagine then shoot into something like this and continue through.

    Mera will look something like this.

    She will have brown hair with blonde and red natural highlights. Not allot of armor and a smaller pointed tail. Slightly longer hair and a little more coverage, something like a dress top, not too loose though. Plus two bangles one on her right arm that’s gold and the left's silver. A choker and a few other things to make her original.

    If you see a ( * ) Please read the bottom later.
    If you see ( ----- ) it's a time skip of 1 day.

    Chapter 1
    After a short leading sentence ( Mera: Why must we kill for these so called masters!" ) while there’s nothing but darkness in front of the reader.
    Then She's walking through a cherry tree road (Like in the picture above except in the dark) Mira's in her human form.
    Mera: So where’s my target brother?
    *Serios: This is your first job sis, please don’t disappoint mother.
    **Seko: Look my dear I wish I could change this for you and us but, it's this or filthy brides and slaves for the true devil's of this Hell that we live in. Please kill the target so that you don’t have to face that horror.
    **Mera: Mother! Why should we stain our hands for there own safety? (Sobbing)
    **Seko: Just do it please! (While crying)
    Mera: Mother why force me to do this?
    -----
    While having coffee with the target ( CEO for a Travel company(Mr.Takshita) )
    She notices her love for the first time. (Kera)
    ***Mera: What's with that guy? (She’s frozen in action (Ready to poison the target))
    Mr.Takshita: Miss?
    Mera: Oh sorry, I need to go for a moment. (Heads for the bathroom (Coffee arrives))
    Moments later...
    Serios kills the target by sending a bus full of common people straight into him.
    Seconds later...
    Serios: Mera are you ok?
    Mera: Yeah.
    Serios: Can you stand?
    Mera: Yes.
    Serios: Why couldn’t you do it?
    Mera: Do what?
    Serios: Kill the Dam TARGET! (In fury)
    Mera: I saw something and I couldn’t do it!
    Serios: Saw what?
    Mera: Pure innocence.
    -----
    -----
    Seko: Ok daughter I know you don’t want too kill anyone but it's out job!
    Mera: Why must we kill to satisfy those evil vile creatures!? (Crying)
    Seko: Hold you tongue! That's it I can’t have you fail me again. I will set you as a failed assassin. (Rank given to the Succubus/Incubus who cannot kill, they can’t even become brides/husbands for even the lowest of all demons. Stript of there royalty and rank, this is the cruelest punishment for them.)
    Mera: There has too be another way!
    Seko: Only if you’re banished from hell and made to suffer on the world above! No friends! No family! You will be cursed to walk the land of mortals until death!
    Mera: Fine! If I don’t have to kill anymore then I will do it!
    -----
    Seko: So what are the conditions for this punishment Serios?
    Serios: She can’t come back, she will transform into demon form during the full moon and...
    Seko: What?
    Serios: The only way she can ever love is to show them her true form.
    Seko: It's better than the fate of a slave to a demon.

    (*) A flashback to the day before.
    (**) A flashback of the day before in the castle.
    (***) Thinking to herself.
    -------------------------------------------------------------------
    Now you have too wait for...
    Chapter 2
    Last edited by viper11025; Apr 20, 2006 at 01:37 PM.

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    Re: Manga Idea : " Succubus "

    nice...
    now im waiting for ch 2
    sig made for the SOTW comp. week of march 31.

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    Re: Manga Idea : " Succubus "

    /heh
    Im thinking.
    (It hurts sometimes)

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    Re: Manga Idea : " Succubus "

    Nice story so far i can't wait for the full novel.... u are goign to write the whole book aren't u... ^_^
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    Re: Manga Idea : " Succubus "

    nice work there, viper. Like the pics there.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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