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Reply With Quotehmmm for the most part i liked it except for when you said 'For love unreturned
Is hate is wait' i really didnt get what you were trying to say so yea overall it made sense ^^ a great way to express your fear although some parts weren't that clear
~The Mask~
I hide behind this mask of lies
Behind the smiling face of mine
Behind the mask I wear
Is pain from love and rejection
The love I felt was always real
But love must be returned
For love unreturned
Is hate in wait
The rejection I recieve from my love's true wish
Caused the pain of love to intensify
For rejection proved
Is love not approved
Only tears can make me express myself
But tears are the weaks true self.
Behind my mask are things unsaid
Pain and hurt will remain unsaid
How can one such as me find love
When love is what hurts the most to me.
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Just a poem I kinda made up. The poem is mainly a fear of mine right now. I hope it doesn't come true. Comment truthfully please.
Last edited by Stormwolf; Jan 08, 2009 at 03:07 PM.
hmmm for the most part i liked it except for when you said 'For love unreturned
Is hate is wait' i really didnt get what you were trying to say so yea overall it made sense ^^ a great way to express your fear although some parts weren't that clear
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the GreatestThank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
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