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    Masking Face

    I smile
    I laugh
    I show happiness

    All you see is
    A mask on
    My face

    You don't know
    The real me
    I'm hiding

    The total opposite
    Of what you see

    Deep inside
    My soul burns
    I'm crying strongly

    Pain I feel
    I want to rid it
    Why aren't I happy?

    I won't explain
    I won't tell
    just know you see
    A mask on my face
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥

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    I have read many poems of the same sort, but among them all, your poem did have that something to differ from the rest. You composed it well, the feelings were firmly implanted. Keep it up.

    EDIT: I accidently posted my comment in the clan section.

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    We all wear masks......I have me a whole collection.......
    Good poem......different than most emo poetry that's been going around lately.
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Wow! This was really awesome Cierra! I soo loved this! The emotion and plot of the poem was wonderful. Alot of people could relate 2 this,me inculded of course lol. But once again awesome job!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    I liked your poem. I look forward to reading your next one.

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    A nice one.... You're good. Yeah, like Shigami said 'awesome job!'.
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Thanks I'm glad you all liked it ^_^

    @taurus - glad to hear it
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