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Reply With QuoteI have read many poems of the same sort, but among them all, your poem did have that something to differ from the rest. You composed it well, the feelings were firmly implanted. Keep it up.
EDIT: I accidently posted my comment in the clan section.
I smile
I laugh
I show happiness
All you see is
A mask on
My face
You don't know
The real me
I'm hiding
The total opposite
Of what you see
Deep inside
My soul burns
I'm crying strongly
Pain I feel
I want to rid it
Why aren't I happy?
I won't explain
I won't tell
just know you see
A mask on my face
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I have read many poems of the same sort, but among them all, your poem did have that something to differ from the rest. You composed it well, the feelings were firmly implanted. Keep it up.
EDIT: I accidently posted my comment in the clan section.
We all wear masks......I have me a whole collection.......
Good poem......different than most emo poetry that's been going around lately.
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Wow! This was really awesome Cierra! I soo loved this! The emotion and plot of the poem was wonderful.Alot of people could relate 2 this,me inculded of course lol.
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
I liked your poem. I look forward to reading your next one.
A nice one.... You're good. Yeah, like Shigami said 'awesome job!'.
Carve an amble now,
Saying that the day's still bright,
And let's play with time.
Thanks I'm glad you all liked it ^_^
@taurus - glad to hear it
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