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    Mass Destruction.

    Over seas?
    Terrorists?
    Black panther man.
    Pumps his fist.
    Next to a proud member
    Of the Arian race.
    Before the feud. Lit the fuse.
    Suicide bomb in the place.
    Mass Destruction
    In the U.S.A.? Maybe.
    Military. Marines.
    Seals in the Navy.
    Blood is thick.
    War is thicker.
    Support our troops,
    On a bumper sticker.
    On a car in rush our...
    ...Bridge collapsed.
    Recovering addict loses loved one.
    ........Relapsed.
    Injecting
    Methamphetamines.
    High prices
    Of gasoline.
    Might as well
    Inhale the vapors.
    Bold print headlines
    In the paper.
    Mass Destruction coming...
    It'll be in your town.
    If your finger is pointed
    Turn it around.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Mass Destruction.

    You always do a good job. It is cool that you are puting current events into you art insted of ripping on sad memories or things that have come to pass.


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    Re: Mass Destruction.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mattness View Post
    You always do a good job. It is cool that you are puting current events into you art insted of ripping on sad memories or things that have come to pass.
    Yeah, Its only that I've gotten sick of my own sad memories, and my own sad state of current affairs... Thats why I felt the urge to touch on things bigger than me. The real things. Issues that make people forget about their own personal soap operas.
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    Re: Mass Destruction.

    My my.... @.@ thats an awesome point of view of the war nowadays in a poem nice... but it's kinda hard to read.. break into stanzas i suggest ^^

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    Re: Mass Destruction.

    Im glad you mentioned that. There was a reason behind the structure... Or lack there of... The poem is about destruction. Structure is a form of construction... Sort of the opposite of the feel I wanted. I wanted you (the reader) to get the sense of chaos and things sort of falling apart, and piling up. I kinda wanted it to be hard to read. Like destruction is hard to witness.

    Thank you for the comment and oppertunity to explain that. BTW I love the text under your sig image. Lasura IS the best ^^. Maybe I sould put something about Lasura on MY sig too! We can start a fanclub!!! (I'm sooo going to do that)

    Edit: Ok I PMed Lasura, and she said you were crediting her... but I still think it would be funny to start a Lasura fanclub.
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    Re: Mass Destruction.

    this poem was awesome and how
    you depicted war and how it dosnt
    just affect one place is cool and prejiduced
    is a majour factor of war as well like you speak of here.

    atleast thats what i think you were doing and
    i liked it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Mass Destruction.

    Yeah.. that is pretty much what I was trying to depict. That , and to say that we're all guilty of our own small pieces of destruction. And if we each have something destructive in our lives... then there is no wonder that theres mass destruction happening all around us.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Mass Destruction.

    WOW is all i have to say because that was faboulus no exaggeration

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