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Reply With QuoteXD, yet again another darkish poem., im loving it.,
i find this one seems sum up the world.,
"The peole cry out in pain with prayers
Breathing with blood filled lungs
Blazing as if set on the sun"
like much desparation.,
GJ!
" Massacre " A tribute to SC Massacre:
Blood beats down against the barren ground
Red droplets filled of anger and sorrow
Shredding to pieces smaller than a pebble
The peole cry out in pain with prayers
Breathing with blood filled lungs
Blazing as if set on the sun
Few words echo in ears
Eyes gleaming a devilish and dark red in that of the innocent
A step shatterd in the time of balance lost
Tossing a home to shambles by fists of human kind
A menacing of one's world collapses
The slaughter of all held dear in the Massacre
XD, yet again another darkish poem., im loving it.,
i find this one seems sum up the world.,
"The peole cry out in pain with prayers
Breathing with blood filled lungs
Blazing as if set on the sun"
like much desparation.,
GJ!
Thank you sooo much Pyro Psycho>
OMG ! You did great! Good job dude! I love it. Love the in-depth you've created!
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
Man I m getting good at this.
This poem is pretty good man, keep it up.
Quite a fine selection of words to describe it all, not a very positive writting, but it has a meaning, so none the less it is appreciable
Originally Posted by Soldat of life
Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
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Nice darkness to it dude. This one is gd.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
/heh thnx for all the incouragement
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