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    Massacre:

    Blood beats down against the barren ground
    Red droplets filled of anger and sorrow
    Shredding to pieces smaller than a pebble

    The peole cry out in pain with prayers
    Breathing with blood filled lungs
    Blazing as if set on the sun

    Few words echo in ears
    Eyes gleaming a devilish and dark red in that of the innocent
    A step shatterd in the time of balance lost

    Tossing a home to shambles by fists of human kind
    A menacing of one's world collapses
    The slaughter of all held dear in the Massacre

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    Re: " Massacre " A tribute to SC

    XD, yet again another darkish poem., im loving it.,

    i find this one seems sum up the world.,

    "The peole cry out in pain with prayers
    Breathing with blood filled lungs
    Blazing as if set on the sun"

    like much desparation.,

    GJ!

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    OMG ! You did great! Good job dude! I love it. Love the in-depth you've created!

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    Man I m getting good at this.

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    Re: " Massacre " A tribute to SC

    This poem is pretty good man, keep it up.

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    Re: " Massacre " A tribute to SC

    Quite a fine selection of words to describe it all, not a very positive writting, but it has a meaning, so none the less it is appreciable
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    Re: " Massacre " A tribute to SC

    Nice darkness to it dude. This one is gd.

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    Re: " Massacre " A tribute to SC

    /heh thnx for all the incouragement

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