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    this may sound cruel, but love doesnt know its place

    you said the times we were together
    made you smile inside
    you said in me you saw your heart
    but one day that all died

    your never said that i was yours
    or that you were mine to claim
    you said you lost me long ago
    but love, you never had me anyways

    the coldness of the words i speak
    may freeze your heart in time
    but love, the pain you claim to know
    wont be but worth a dime

    take your hopes, take your wishes
    and love, take how you feel
    think of what youve done to me
    and tell me this love is real
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    Re: this may sound cruel, but love doesnt know its place

    Awww how lovely! I like it!! 10!!
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    Re: this may sound cruel, but love doesnt know its place

    hmph (concentrate i give it a 6/10)

    its kinda a libre poema.
    but i like the ending.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: this may sound cruel, but love doesnt know its place

    i think you were tlkin in spanish so i havent a clue wat that says.. second work poetry but yea... *lost*
    oh well
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    Re: this may sound cruel, but love doesnt know its place

    Quote Originally Posted by animechick View Post
    i think you were tlkin in spanish so i havent a clue wat that says.. second work poetry but yea... *lost*
    oh well
    i mean free poem not much rime at the middle but the end is great. ^^



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    Re: this may sound cruel, but love doesnt know its place

    i like the poem its very good!! and what baal meant was a "free verse poem"

    keep the good work up!
    -JOSE

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    Re: this may sound cruel, but love doesnt know its place

    Quote Originally Posted by kakashi_sensei View Post
    i like the poem its very good!! and what baal meant was a "free verse poem"

    keep the good work up!
    -JOSE
    aye
    doesnt rime in much lines
    or free verse...



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    Re: this may sound cruel, but love doesnt know its place

    oh i get it!! and thx both or you
    im taking spanish 1 but i cant say anything more thne the house it white and my name is maria, nice to meet you ricardo.
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