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    maybe/maybe not...a pure love

    I have been put down.

    Ignored, bullyed.

    No one had really cared.

    But any problems I had.

    You were always there.

    Never looked down on me.

    Not even for the most stupid thing.

    I kept my love a secret.

    Even when I knew I could tell you.

    I had given hints.

    You didn’t notice.

    I tried to flirt.

    Witch I didn’t know how.

    I wrote a poem.

    Told to go for it.

    I told you.

    Did you really mean those words you said?

    You’re all I can think about while I’m lying here –
    Looking at the sky.

    With the love growing more strong by the day
    Even if the love you have for me is not pure.

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    Re: maybe/maybe not...a pure love

    This is a wonderful poem, especially the last lines:
    "You’re all I can think about while I’m lying here –
    Looking at the sky.

    With the love growing more strong by the day
    Even if the love you have for me is not pure."
    They are so tue to me! I really like this peom of yours! They're really emotional and the sad story you tell... so beautiful!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: maybe/maybe not...a pure love

    Great poem! Two thumps up! Hope to see more in the future!
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    Re: maybe/maybe not...a pure love

    I love your poems each one is sweeter and more beautiful than the last. The Last two lines just show how devoted a person can be to someone its a very hard thing to do. Great poems cant wait for the next
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    Remember to give detailed comments with good quality.
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    Re: maybe/maybe not...a pure love

    This poem sounds like the most part of my teenage years cause I went though the same thing. I was treated babdly sometimes and had crushes on guys that I pitched every hint I could throw at them and none of them got it. I never tried again till I became an adult and it finally worked. I couldn't believe it,but I was so happy it did.
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    thanks for the commnets ^______________________^...........

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    Re: maybe/maybe not...a pure love

    Men i hate myself i can't even think about a great poem

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