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Old Aug 23, 2006, 12:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Why is everything so confusing?
All of what you've said to me
Has pulled me to follow different
paths to you're feelings
towards me

I see you care about me
But what about all the hugs you've given me
All the times you've told me
That I'm more important than anyone else
What does all of it mean?

You really broken my heart
When you shattered it to pieces
My whole world came down on me
When you broke the happy news
That you were in love
with someone, not me.

Still, I'm afraid to admit
Ive got these sappy feelings for you

So...
I love you
And I hate it
I musnt say it
I cannot fake it
I cannot hide
I might as well embrace it

And Belive me,
It isn't easy
To hide it all inside
And pretend we're only friends

If I could control this damn heart
Hell, Id be more than happy
Cuz it's drivin me insane
To lie everyday

Pullin me this way and that
I wish I hadn't fallen in love
Cuz what I have for you
Is more than serious
You must stay atleast
30 ft away
Cuz I'll go crazy to know
You love her more than anything

Why am I like this?
It remains a mystery to me
Why I love you this way
Why I cannot say it to you're face

I wonder
Did lord let all this forever be
Will we be together somday

Or will I forever hold this secret passion
The sweetest tempations I love to keep
All to myself
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Old Aug 23, 2006, 12:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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wow this was very good i liked how you explained how you loved this guy but could never tell him like a secret admirer or something . to be close yet so far
is one thing love does to everyone and you expressed it well here.
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Old Aug 23, 2006, 11:41 AM   #3 (permalink)
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hey star girl ^^ the first poem i read for you
it's really good, i loved it, keep it up

But what about all the hugs you've given me
All the times you've told me

if you changed the but to and
i think it will be better ^^
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Old Aug 23, 2006, 01:17 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like it. Keep it up...................
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