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Reply With QuoteNot bad Saz I like it =) its nice keep them coming
Past has be unsettling
Things I cannot shake
Not really liking
What happened to me
Things never really
Went smoothly
Bad things seemed to always
Happen to me
Being upset
By people close
I can never stop it
Just happens to me
I want it to stop
But it still happens
No matter what I try
Happens to me
I wish all the pain
Would go away
Leave me for ever
Won’t happen to me
But if pain
Is still close by
I must accept it
Happening to me
Nothing to change
What is going on
So just let it be
Happens to me
So forgive me
For me so down
Its just me being me
Happens to me
So let it be known
That I am not
Like other people
For it happens to me
just an old poem
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Not bad Saz I like it =) its nice keep them coming
Awesome poem Zas, your not having a good time don't you?!
The chopped up verses in the stanzas? It gives me a sense that the poem is incomplete. Perhaps, another way of forming your stanzas?
-pats- Hope everything is going well.
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very nice.. it was interesting.
yeah it will definatly be one of those i rework!!Originally Posted by Kasai
Thank you for your comments!!
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Its old, but its impressive enough that you didn't noticed it was old...
its old because i don't actually remember writing it. But i found it on my PC.
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