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    To me

    Past has be unsettling
    Things I cannot shake
    Not really liking
    What happened to me

    Things never really
    Went smoothly
    Bad things seemed to always
    Happen to me

    Being upset
    By people close
    I can never stop it
    Just happens to me

    I want it to stop
    But it still happens
    No matter what I try
    Happens to me

    I wish all the pain
    Would go away
    Leave me for ever
    Won’t happen to me

    But if pain
    Is still close by
    I must accept it
    Happening to me

    Nothing to change
    What is going on
    So just let it be
    Happens to me

    So forgive me
    For me so down
    Its just me being me
    Happens to me

    So let it be known
    That I am not
    Like other people
    For it happens to me


    just an old poem
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    Not bad Saz I like it =) its nice keep them coming

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    Awesome poem Zas, your not having a good time don't you?!

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    The chopped up verses in the stanzas? It gives me a sense that the poem is incomplete. Perhaps, another way of forming your stanzas?

    -pats- Hope everything is going well.
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    Re: To me

    very nice.. it was interesting.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    The chopped up verses in the stanzas? It gives me a sense that the poem is incomplete. Perhaps, another way of forming your stanzas?

    -pats- Hope everything is going well.
    yeah it will definatly be one of those i rework!!

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    Re: To me

    Its old, but its impressive enough that you didn't noticed it was old...

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    its old because i don't actually remember writing it. But i found it on my PC.
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