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    Me, the disease

    I am.
    The reason they cant love freely.
    The reason his dad is absent.
    The reason she doesn't get enough time in her day.

    When I speak.
    Its to beg.
    Its to cry.
    Its to be ignored.


    When I love.
    Its needy.
    Its obsession.
    Its not good enough.

    When I breathe.
    I get the feeling I contribute...
    ... to everyones virus.
    Survivng hurts me, because I make them sick.

    When I do something nice.
    Theres a motive.
    What do I want?
    How could I be so selfish?

    I am the disease.
    Got any disinfectant?
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Me, the disease

    Lol. i enjoyed this poem very much. The short sentences made for excellent form and allowed you to have a bit of wit in the end.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Me, the disease

    Its funny, because when I try hard to work on the composition of something... It never turns as quite as good as the poems I just write on a whim. (Like this one.)
    ... Not Ever Again...

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