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    Exclamation Me... ((Thoughts have past))

    The sky fades.
    My eyes gray.
    Never more, never less.
    I follow without the pressure of having to be noticed.
    Reckless though; I find ambition to be me.
    I've never, ever felt as free as I do now.
    Jealousy had never set in.
    I follow my own track and stick to my own pace.

    Believing my own dream, is what I do.
    Leaving troublesome thoughts behind and welcoming new ones.
    Shy, is what I have always felt but I feel it no longer.
    I stray away from adolescent and stay at peace with my own self.

    I read more into my own thoughts and think about my actions.
    Leaving all the fayed pieces behind.
    I'm not ready to give in again.
    I'll be well and ready on my own terms.
    I'm way to strong to break down.
    Way to smart to remember the past as well.

    ((Please read and tell me what you think, post or message me please! I just made it up as I went))
    "Quit the touchy, feely, self-help, yoga crap!"

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    Re: Me... ((Thoughts have past))

    Well your better at making poems than I 'am!

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    Re: Me... ((Thoughts have past))

    Choolness, Gloomeh! It kinda sounds like the person, you I think, is going on a long journey to find peace... or something along those lines. Like you're on the road to heaven or becoming a saint. It's really good. Best poem I've read all day. Keep it up.

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    Re: Me... ((Thoughts have past))

    Your good keep it up and I like the fact that you belive in your oun dreems many dont
    keep it hope to read more of them ^_^

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
    ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~

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