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    Me Without You

    In this world, your heart is mine
    Your name is on my lips
    You have been my love from heaven
    Come back to me again
    A Life time without you
    Until I finally found you

    listen to me carefully, I love you
    All alone in this room, without you
    Now its raining without you
    In this spring night, your far away from me

    Life with you is so beautiful
    Hand in hand sweety, lets be together

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    Is there going 2 be more ingcho 100% series

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    Re: Me Without You

    now this is true love poem, i give it a 10, i like the ending part, now that how it should be, keep up the good work
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    Re: Me Without You

    Nice depiction of how true love is supposed to be and I agree with dark wolf this is how love is supposed to be!

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    Re: Me Without You

    Quote Originally Posted by Star Girl View Post
    In this world, your heart is mine
    Your name is on my lips
    You have been my love from heaven
    Come back to me again
    A Life time without you
    Until I finally found you

    listen to me carefully, I love you
    All alone in this room, without you
    Now its raining without you
    In this spring night, your far away from me

    Life with you is so beautiful
    Hand in hand sweety, lets be together
    wow i love this! talk 2 me sumtime..... i'm semi new to this so dont laugh at me too badly.....okay????/

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueFox1 View Post
    Nice depiction of how true love is supposed to be and I agree with dark wolf this is how love is supposed to be!
    i seriously agree w/ you it is how true love should be.....: im new at this so dont laugh if i sound corny......

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    Re: Me Without You

    I have no any comments at all, but true love for you never dies though...
    Its very nice, I'm glad that I've read it... Good job...

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