Thread: Me Without You

Is there going 2 be more ingcho 100% series

now this is true love poem, i give it a 10, i like the ending part, now that how it should be, keep up the good work

Nice depiction of how true love is supposed to be and I agree with dark wolf this is how love is supposed to be!

Originally Posted by Star Girl

In this world, your heart is mine
Your name is on my lips
You have been my love from heaven
Come back to me again
A Life time without you
Until I finally found you

listen to me carefully, I love you
All alone in this room, without you
Now its raining without you
In this spring night, your far away from me

Life with you is so beautiful
Hand in hand sweety, lets be together

wow i love this! talk 2 me sumtime..... i'm semi new to this so dont laugh at me too badly.....okay????/

Originally Posted by BlueFox1

Nice depiction of how true love is supposed to be and I agree with dark wolf this is how love is supposed to be!

i seriously agree w/ you it is how true love should be.....: im new at this so dont laugh if i sound corny......

I have no any comments at all, but true love for you never dies though...
Its very nice, I'm glad that I've read it... Good job...