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    「Someone」 Goo Slasher Champion, Fish Kill Champion, Rapid Motion Champion, Cell-Out Champion, Sober Santa 2 Champion, Flower Girl Champion KuwiRules145 is off to a good start KuwiRules145's Avatar
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    Thank you little negi! I really thank you! So thank you!
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    hmmm... a nice poem, I like it, I like the way you've written it, I like what you've told in it... very nice, and especially I loved this one line: "The lies, the tears, the fights, and the rage", it's just great I think, you've put a lot of feelings in this line and it makes the poem more tense and more interesting...

    Nice, I hope to see more

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    kiwi i love all ur poems but this one is ur best so far i love all the love in it♥da princess
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Awww...I thank you both really! I really thank you so thank you!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Aw, cute cute! Great job! ^_^ YEAH! WOO HOO! YOU ROCK!

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    Re: Me without you

    Quote Originally Posted by redeyed_impure_soul View Post
    Aw, cute cute! Great job! ^_^ YEAH! WOO HOO! YOU ROCK!
    Awww.....Thank you so much really! I thank you I really thank you so well THANK YOU!!!
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