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    Me and You

    since the moment i laid my eyes on u
    no one else even crossed my mind
    i think about that day
    for i truly saw an angel

    then when you look at me
    i started to feel love inside of me
    for i knew you were the one for me
    the only one that i can see

    ur voice had such a sweet tone.
    her/his eyes shined brighter than any star in the sky.
    her/ his being just took me away
    and i never wanted to go back to a dull world with out u by my side

    then he/she touched me with a gentle hand
    the touch so gentle it's like a gentle breeze
    he/she opens his mouth ands says
    i love you and will you stay with me
    stay until the end off time

    Me and ryomakurosaki made this one up together hope you all like it

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    i hope u all truly enjoy this (bows). we worked very hard on it. plz reply and give us ur ideas about it. thanks for reading it.
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    I like this poem very much, it's really, really sweet and full of love... ^^ Nice work you two!!! I like the way you've written this... very interesting- something I haven't seen before ^^

    Indeed very lovely!!! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Me and You

    i love this poem it really shows
    how love for he/she can really make
    a life so dull and empty with out he/she
    love truly does decide how your life will
    go.

    heck a good morning kiss with a hug
    cna make the day that could have been
    misrable that much sweeter and happier
    very cool . great poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Me and You

    aww... such a sweet poem ^^ nice... good job... im no good in making poems like this muahahaha

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    you know rayme your so funny, i bet you could if you tried

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    Great poem very well done hope you mkae some more
    and good luck

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    Re: Me and You

    Amazing aeonking by the way i never knew i'd already commented shheeesh oh well i understand now good luck aeonking you know what i mean (i hope)

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