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    Me & You <3

    Life is lovely
    When I'm with you
    The thrill I get when I press my cheek to
    My only desire
    To see you smile

    You look at me
    And I look back
    The touch of you're hand
    As we run to hide
    You pull me to you're side
    Then you whisper in my ear
    All I want to hear

    In you're embrace I feel you're warmth
    So beautiful the way you touch
    You're lips to mine
    And all is fine
    Up in the sky
    In eachothers arms
    Thats where we belong

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    Re: Me & You <3

    That was a sweet poem. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Me & You <3

    Life is lovely
    When I'm with you
    The thrill I get when I press my cheek to
    My only desire
    To see you smile

    The third verse seems to be... It doesnt seem to fit.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Me & You <3

    You look at me
    And I look back
    The touch of you're hand
    As we run to hide
    You pull me to you're side
    Then you whisper in my ear
    All I want to hear
    I like this stanza the most. It was a pretty kool poem by the way.

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    Re: Me & You <3

    The third line of your poem is a bit long and doesn't seem to fit. But other than that good poem!

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    Re: Me & You <3

    It seems your inspired... Hope you continue doing some more... So inspiring...

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