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Reply With Quotei hate to so say this but i cant find meaning of this poem its saying in my head that u have alot of stuff to do but has writer block and now u wish you could go to sleep
I'm tapping this pencil across
my brain and hoping for a miracle.
My hands are cold and stiff,
there's a slight drift.
Nothing seems to satisfy my dreams.
If only I could paint
the sky blue and black.
If only the world I could turn back.
Words have become dead.
Slouching back in my chair
I can feel the night air and share its
company.
If god could hear me I would
tell him of how by ourselves we have ruined everything.
All together we shall destroy
this world forever.
Dear Dinah...
i hate to so say this but i cant find meaning of this poem its saying in my head that u have alot of stuff to do but has writer block and now u wish you could go to sleep
cool poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeah, Bye.
I understand the poem but I don't understand how the title fits with the premise of the poem the morning isn't mentioned in the poem once.
Thanks to FLawed love the sig.
Pressure makes gems, Ease makes decay.
The poem has many meanings. The meanings are just encrypted rather than protruding from the poem. As for the title. A title can have relevance to a poem wether or not the title is mentioned in the poem ^-^
Dear Dinah...
Yay!!!!!!!!! I'm not the only one thinking about bringing the worlds end!!!!!!!!! I thought I'm crazy already...
A nice poem, enjoyed reading it... You're really good Kelly... Your writing is great! I think I'm becoming kind of a fan of yours...
Aww..really? You're going to give me a big head lol. No...sometimes I don't even like my own poetry lol. Anyway...thanks for the compliment. By the way your poetry is very good as well ^-^
Dear Dinah...
Very great poem indeed!!! I love how you wrote it and I just love the last line!!!!!!!
"All together we shall destroy
this world forever."
So great poem!!! I hope to see more!!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
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