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    Meet The Morning

    I'm tapping this pencil across
    my brain and hoping for a miracle.

    My hands are cold and stiff,
    there's a slight drift.

    Nothing seems to satisfy my dreams.

    If only I could paint
    the sky blue and black.

    If only the world I could turn back.

    Words have become dead.

    Slouching back in my chair
    I can feel the night air and share its
    company.

    If god could hear me I would
    tell him of how by ourselves we have ruined everything.

    All together we shall destroy
    this world forever.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Meet The Morning

    i hate to so say this but i cant find meaning of this poem its saying in my head that u have alot of stuff to do but has writer block and now u wish you could go to sleep

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    Re: Meet The Morning

    cool poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Meet The Morning

    I understand the poem but I don't understand how the title fits with the premise of the poem the morning isn't mentioned in the poem once.

    Thanks to FLawed love the sig.

    Pressure makes gems, Ease makes decay.

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    Re: Meet The Morning

    The poem has many meanings. The meanings are just encrypted rather than protruding from the poem. As for the title. A title can have relevance to a poem wether or not the title is mentioned in the poem ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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    Yay!!!!!!!!! I'm not the only one thinking about bringing the worlds end!!!!!!!!! I thought I'm crazy already...

    A nice poem, enjoyed reading it... You're really good Kelly... Your writing is great! I think I'm becoming kind of a fan of yours...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Meet The Morning

    Aww..really? You're going to give me a big head lol. No...sometimes I don't even like my own poetry lol. Anyway...thanks for the compliment. By the way your poetry is very good as well ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Meet The Morning

    Very great poem indeed!!! I love how you wrote it and I just love the last line!!!!!!!

    "All together we shall destroy
    this world forever."

    So great poem!!! I hope to see more!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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