Strange how things work, but I kind of had my own revelation at that point too.
sorry but suicide doesnt really need practice i knew a man for a long time who was nice and he did not have any demons he was a happy person its just his back hurt and he got tired of it and killed himself but ive been at gun point before to and knife point i dont really feel like dieing anymore but people still want me dead its sucks, i wanna write a sudden realization from last night ,
as i lie in my bed i stare and weep
realizing an ungrateful father
a mourning mother
and a sister who has to prove im worthless
all sit and laugh in the living room
i sit and feel the darkness wrapping itself tightly around me
it starts to get hard to breathe and makes me think
i think about the world
people are considered the cruelest animals of all
whether they know they may be or not
an old lady gets mugged on her way to her daughter's wedding
you dont stop the thief why because what did she ever do for you
why would you risk being killed for another person
then watching on the news you find out a mother and her four kids are dead
you think they were another bunch of sad bums
but put yourself in their shoes when they were killed
a mother defenseless to someone who had the intention from the start to kill
what do you do?
what about religion most people who have a religion try to say their religion is better
some dont believe in trying to convert people
but yet why must a pagan or atheist spit on the christian or the hindu
because of their faith or because they think they are better?
thats why when you think about the meaning of life isnt one thing but many
one meaning is for those with a heart can live life to its fullest
another meaning is to not hate those above you or pity those below you
as humans the meaning of life can go on and on
and many dont understand having a heart you must show fear, anger, sadness, etc.
but also not to run away from these feelings
to have a heart is to help what you can such as the old lady
most people who dont help show they may not be truly living
life is just an illusion we have until death which just shows us suffering
why we musnt die though is your afraid not because you'll be dead but you wonder
the thing you wonder is whether god is truly real
people you may disagree but trust me
not just that but the atheist wonders why someone would believe in a god
answer is simple to make dieing less painful
also because those with hearts are one with their soul
so tell me after reading this what is my life worth to you?
what is the old lady's life worth to you?
most important what is your life worth to you?
i really enjoy reading this poem is was very meaning ful you have a lot going for you keep it up and dont lose sight.
The format needs a little bit of work, as it is right now it comes off somewhat distracting. No real comprehension either. Title is misleading also.
I posted this before I got my journal, but if I had it before, I'd rather put it in there.
But the reason the title is what it is because I wanted to give the feel that instead of his life flashing before his eyes before he died, he glimpse a little bit of the world of the dead. Which seems peaceful, but it's well..dead. And the absence of life is what would make him regret what he was about to do.
thanks for the criticism, 'cause now I know what to work on.
*Quoting the whole poem is not needed* ~ Aceman67
HEY! EMO don't mind if I can use it on my English Class or something else?(I will owe you TONS OF GRATITUDE!) ....or(to have a see in my friends in here)
Sure, anyone can use it as long as they give me gratitude. =D
and nice lines Akaryu, I could relate to them a lot, keep it up. You could should try rhymes too, I'd like to see how that turns out.
thanks dude it just came to me, now anyone else have any awesome poems to write???