Memoir of my Death

I would love to use it in my english class project, but I don't go to school.

I usually don't like poems that don't rhyme, however I like the deep dark theme with the heart warming inspirational ending. Kudos!

Hay Emo dude now i'm really glad I came back to Ao tonight!
This is the best work i'v read in a long time, no one comes close to this depth.

wow thats really long but good i liked the ending the most the way the sun set brought love into the memoir its really cool :worship:

lying here lifeless,
thinking of your face,
i love you to much to care what other people say.
i know there will be a day or two,
when i dont feel completley in love with you,
im willing to take these risks,
i can remember that one kiss.
dont tell me im hot, only beautiful,
dont tell me you love me a lot, only a little.
lets give it one more shot,
i promise you we can make it work.
make it worth the time,
i just wanna know your mine,
so im not lying here lifeless,
thinking of your face.