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    Re: Memoir of my Death

    Thanks guys, I really appreciate any feedback. Sadly this is one of the only things I've looked back on and am not emabarassed about.
    I really hate sometimes to use free verse, but rhymes could never work for this. I hoped this wasn't too emo for you guys, i wasn't going for that. lol.
    That's why at the end there's more of a uplifting factor. At least I tried to.

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    dude get that shit published you could be the next artistic icon to be modeled after such artists as emily dickinson and edgar allen poe think you could be the next edgar allen poe

    Fear is a state of mind
    to me fear does not exist

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    wow very nice poem...i am not interested that much in poems but after reading your poem i couldn't keep away my self for posting....(great thoughts!!!)

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    I agree with Akaryu792. You should get it published its really one of my new favorite poems. O be the way is it ok if I use it my english class project. I like it so i'm asking if I can use it. If not its alright.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SelfTorment View Post
    I agree with Akaryu792. You should get it published its really one of my new favorite poems. O be the way is it ok if I use it my english class project. I like it so i'm asking if I can use it. If not its alright.
    Dude! Sure, just give me cred okay?
    Just say it was done by Nathaniel Blackbird(my name). I'm just glad everyone liked it.

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    dude id give full props to that poem is a really good poem i havent read something good like that in a while so i would give full cred to you if it was published

    Fear is a state of mind
    to me fear does not exist

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    Re: Memoir of my Death

    Thank you and don't worry i wouldn't take crediat of it.
    This poem is to good to come out of my mind and my teachers know that too.
    The real thing i like about this and why i want to use it is because I found myself
    in the same senerio as this person I didn't have an angel talk me out of it but the gun
    did misfire so maybe it was an angel or i need a new gun but thats in the past.
    Thank you again i'll tell you if my classmates like it or not is that alright?

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    Re: Memoir of my Death

    It's not too emo man
    I liked how it ended
    He at least felt love
    Im a romanticism guy so I love this kind of things ^^

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