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    Re: Memoir of my Death

    I would love to use it in my english class project, but I don't go to school.

    I usually don't like poems that don't rhyme, however I like the deep dark theme with the heart warming inspirational ending. Kudos!

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    Hay Emo dude now i'm really glad I came back to Ao tonight!
    This is the best work i'v read in a long time, no one comes close to this depth.
    Kamen Rider....DECADE!!!

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    wow thats really long but good i liked the ending the most the way the sun set brought love into the memoir its really cool

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    Re: Memoir of my Death

    lying here lifeless,
    thinking of your face,
    i love you to much to care what other people say.
    i know there will be a day or two,
    when i dont feel completley in love with you,
    im willing to take these risks,
    i can remember that one kiss.
    dont tell me im hot, only beautiful,
    dont tell me you love me a lot, only a little.
    lets give it one more shot,
    i promise you we can make it work.
    make it worth the time,
    i just wanna know your mine,
    so im not lying here lifeless,
    thinking of your face.

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