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    Memories

    Memories

    The rustling of leaves,
    howling of the wind.
    The sloshing the water made,
    the splashing the river always.

    This place holds the best of it.
    The low and big shadowy tree,
    has stood there for years.
    Accompanied through my childhood.

    The running stream nearby,
    brought life to all the living things nearby.
    Just sitting there and listening to the sounds.
    It soothes my pain.

    No more problems.
    My best hideaway.
    Climbing up the trees nearby,
    running around and sleep next to the big tree.

    How i loved the days.
    Just being there gives me comfort.
    Makes me calm and relaxed.
    Now...the place is no more...

    My sanctuary...
    Now it's nothing more than a treasured memory.
    One of the best memories...
    from my childhood.

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    Re: Memories

    Ahh... this poem made me cry... It made me very dreamy too... A wonderful poem Ray!!!! It's just great!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!! ^^

    Here's a pic for it... ^^



    A great work Ray... I love all of your poems, this is one of the best!!! ^^ Great!!!!

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    Re: Memories

    yes iam with Lasura what she say ...it was a great poem ...there are many feeling sad , happy , lonely and others ...i love it ...

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    Re: Memories

    That was a very calming poem. It made me think back to my own childhood. I loved the writing style..magnificent. It was lovely...I give it a 9 out of 10 ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Memories

    ahh.. almost hit 10~!!! ~.~ lol ^^

    thx xxoxx ^^

    Yesh`! thx for the pic laura you're the best it really goes with the mood for this poem ^^ silly i did not mention about the green carpet... -.-
    ahh i'll make memories 2 after this ^^ about me new sanctuary

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