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    Memories

    As I lay under the stars and moon
    I think about the memories we had
    They were endless as can be
    Like the stars in the sky

    I liked you so much
    You did too
    At least that's what I thought
    I wish that was true

    We really had good times
    All the things we shared
    Same interests, same sights
    It was unbelievable

    But how words they are true
    Unbelievable they were
    It was all a lie
    Yes, I knew, I saw

    I guess it was too good
    I guess we can't have everything
    But that's how life is
    I'll just keep on living

    So as I lay here under the stars
    Like endless memories
    They will be erased
    As a new day begins

    Writer's Notes: This is my first sort of non-rhyming poem. I'm not really good at these but I just wanted to give it a shot. I don't think it's really good, but I guess I always say that. I would like to hear what you think. Thanks for reading.

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    Re: Memories

    I think it is really good ti reminds me of things that i thought i wouldnt know ii would remember and i think ti is better them amy poem i have wrote

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    Re: Memories

    thats a very beautiful poem, i thought it was one of your best, but thats just me.

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