Thread: the memories

Originally Posted by iluvmyloser

i hold up
my tears
behind the mirror
of my true self.

listening to the rain
just brings back memmories,
that make me
heart broken.

the rain represents
my tears along
with the wind
that make me sad.

so i look at the time
and its seems
the same to me
i can help but notice
how this is helping me.

the rain clears up
and so does my face
but that does not mean
it will stop to rain.....
_________
i lost my grandfather about a year ago...and i had to say how i felt...*holds up tears*

Oh dear princess... it's ok princess! I lost my great grandmother this year on March ok! And I know your pain as well! This poem was so deep and sad but I enjoyed reading it! This poem hearts breaks me but it was just so good to read! So I hope to see more ok.

Originally Posted by KuwiRules145

Oh dear princess... it's ok princess! I lost my great grandmother this year on March ok! And I know your pain as well! This poem was so deep and sad but I enjoyed reading it! This poem hearts breaks me but it was just so good to read! So I hope to see more ok.

*cries*thank you kiwi...but unfortunatly it's true..but thank you.you're starting to make me feel better*wipes tears then runs away crying again*

Oh wow this was really really sad but it had nice writing. I understand your pain cause I lost both my parents so yeah good poem I loved it. ^^

Its spelled Memories...
Its an ok poem, keep up the good work.

yeah...i kinda noticed that later on....and i have no way to correct the tittle once it is submitted,but thank you for the comment akura & aceman

that was really good nina and im srry bout grandfather it must be really hard

well it was...especially being there when it happened but thank you all for posting on this it makes me feel better.