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    the memories

    i hold up
    my tears
    behind the mirror
    of my true self.


    listening to the rain
    just brings back memmories,
    that make me
    heart broken.


    the rain represents
    my tears along
    with the wind
    that make me sad.


    so i look at the time
    and its seems
    the same to me
    i can help but notice
    how this is helping me.


    the rain clears up
    and so does my face
    but that does not mean
    it will stop to rain.....

    _________
    i lost my grandfather about a year ago...and i had to say how i felt...*holds up tears*
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: the memmories

    Quote Originally Posted by iluvmyloser View Post
    i hold up
    my tears
    behind the mirror
    of my true self.


    listening to the rain
    just brings back memmories,
    that make me
    heart broken.


    the rain represents
    my tears along
    with the wind
    that make me sad.


    so i look at the time
    and its seems
    the same to me
    i can help but notice
    how this is helping me.


    the rain clears up
    and so does my face
    but that does not mean
    it will stop to rain.....

    _________
    i lost my grandfather about a year ago...and i had to say how i felt...*holds up tears*
    Oh dear princess... it's ok princess! I lost my great grandmother this year on March ok! And I know your pain as well! This poem was so deep and sad but I enjoyed reading it! This poem hearts breaks me but it was just so good to read! So I hope to see more ok.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: the memmories

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    Oh dear princess... it's ok princess! I lost my great grandmother this year on March ok! And I know your pain as well! This poem was so deep and sad but I enjoyed reading it! This poem hearts breaks me but it was just so good to read! So I hope to see more ok.
    *cries*thank you kiwi...but unfortunatly it's true..but thank you.you're starting to make me feel better*wipes tears then runs away crying again*
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: the memmories

    Oh wow this was really really sad but it had nice writing. I understand your pain cause I lost both my parents so yeah good poem I loved it. ^^



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    Re: the memmories

    Its spelled Memories...
    Its an ok poem, keep up the good work.

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    yeah...i kinda noticed that later on....and i have no way to correct the tittle once it is submitted,but thank you for the comment akura & aceman
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: the memories

    that was really good nina and im srry bout grandfather it must be really hard

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    well it was...especially being there when it happened but thank you all for posting on this it makes me feel better.
    Yeah, Bye.

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