this is my very first poem posted here... hehe! may you enjoy reading. open for opinons and criticisms!
Memories of rainy days
Memories of rainy days
In my heart still stays
Memories that seems like yesterday
Still haunts me every single day.
Memories of you so fresh,
Feels like blood still rushes in my flesh.
It was a rainy day when you confessed,
That our love cannot be longer saved.
Blamed me that it is all my fault
Not knowing that you are giving me an insult.
You left me in the pouring rain
With all your gift of pain
My black eyes filled with tears
While i sobbed with no one could hear.
Last edited by raja_psyche; Jul 29, 2006 at 06:43 AM.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
You left me in the pouring rain...
With all your gift of pain...
My black eyes filled with tears...
While i sobbed with no one could hear...
i love this part the hoplessness and blamming becuase of how
of anothers actions towards you in love.while know one hears you
man this is a very goo poem and the end was awesome
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
This poem is really good...you kno why?....Cuz i think its good lolz. hey this kinda attaches to my other poem "love and rain" lolz
If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life
wow. thanks for your opinions, i really appreciated it. hehe.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
ur poem is nice...^__^
left behind.... i think that's sad... =(
Thanks for appreciation,
i'm also open to criticisms for the reason that it helps me to make worthwhile reading poems...
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Frozen Maiden
Look straight into my purple eyes
You’ll feel my soul is frozen with ice.
Now, can you feel what I feel?
The anguish you caused me for real.
Please don’t look away,
I have so much to say
Please don’t turn your back…
I must keep you on my track.
Your absence made my heart grow fonder
But made my mind in endless wonder,
If you would be back in my arms again
Would you heal my endless emotional pain?
As I embrace you very tight,
It feels that your love has lost its sight
Making it hard for me to accept
It seems my wit comes to its end.
Go, leave me alone and be merry!
Because deep in my soul you are no longer happy
In any moment, I will be knocking at the death’s door
So that I will not suffer and yearn for you anymore…
Last edited by raja_psyche; Jul 29, 2006 at 08:02 PM.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
finding love in the rain n only to have the same sort of day happen wen he left u
acceptance of the lonelyiness.......
nice poems keep it up
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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