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    Memories of rainy days...

    this is my very first poem posted here... hehe! may you enjoy reading. open for opinons and criticisms!



    Memories of rainy days

    Memories of rainy days
    In my heart still stays
    Memories that seems like yesterday
    Still haunts me every single day.

    Memories of you so fresh,
    Feels like blood still rushes in my flesh.

    It was a rainy day when you confessed,
    That our love cannot be longer saved.
    Blamed me that it is all my fault
    Not knowing that you are giving me an insult.

    You left me in the pouring rain
    With all your gift of pain
    My black eyes filled with tears
    While i sobbed with no one could hear.

    Last edited by raja_psyche; Jul 29, 2006 at 06:43 AM.

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    Re: Memories of rainy days...

    You left me in the pouring rain...
    With all your gift of pain...
    My black eyes filled with tears...
    While i sobbed with no one could hear...


    i love this part the hoplessness and blamming becuase of how
    of anothers actions towards you in love.while know one hears you
    man this is a very goo poem and the end was awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Memories of rainy days...

    This poem is really good...you kno why?....Cuz i think its good lolz. hey this kinda attaches to my other poem "love and rain" lolz
    If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life

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    Re: Memories of rainy days...

    wow. thanks for your opinions, i really appreciated it. hehe.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Memories of rainy days...

    ur poem is nice...^__^
    left behind.... i think that's sad... =(

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    Re: Memories of rainy days...

    Thanks for appreciation,

    i'm also open to criticisms for the reason that it helps me to make worthwhile reading poems...

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    Frozen Maiden

    Look straight into my purple eyes
    You’ll feel my soul is frozen with ice.
    Now, can you feel what I feel?
    The anguish you caused me for real.

    Please don’t look away,
    I have so much to say
    Please don’t turn your back…
    I must keep you on my track.

    Your absence made my heart grow fonder
    But made my mind in endless wonder,
    If you would be back in my arms again
    Would you heal my endless emotional pain?

    As I embrace you very tight,
    It feels that your love has lost its sight
    Making it hard for me to accept
    It seems my wit comes to its end.

    Go, leave me alone and be merry!
    Because deep in my soul you are no longer happy
    In any moment, I will be knocking at the death’s door
    So that I will not suffer and yearn for you anymore…


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    Re: Memories of rainy days...

    finding love in the rain n only to have the same sort of day happen wen he left u

    acceptance of the lonelyiness.......

    nice poems keep it up

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