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    Memorys

    Do you remember when you said you loved the way my love for you refleacted in my eyes....
    How you brushed my hair out of my face....
    You always said you loved my smile and it could make the sun shineon a rainy day...
    I use to see your love for me burning in your eyes...
    Icould tell you loved me with every touch of your hands.....
    You topuched my heart like no one else could ever do....
    I thought you could never do this to me...
    You were the one to tell me I Love You first..
    I made you wait so long then once you have all of me you take it and breakme down....
    After feelling me with all those lies breacking me down like this and leaveing...
    With nothing but one phone cal you said never call me agian...
    I wish I could make you feel the way I do you about me...
    I want to make you hurt like i do inside every time i remember how you stoped loveing me without a warning........
    I try to drink you away but you come back in the morning......
    How could I move on if your always haunting me........
    Not letting me let go of you every where I go somethin reminds me of you...
    And I catch myself thinkin and talkin about you.....
    It hurts so bad when i see you with her That I want to die.....
    I'm so scared that i'll never let go and no one can mend my broken heart....
    So I''l contine drinkin smoke and tryin to get over you with someone else Hopeing this one can finaly mend my broken heart...
    For you will always have a seacil place in my heart!!!


    I hope all yall like it...Its really about me and my ex some of this really happened to my like the phone call..but hope yall like it!!!!*-*
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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    Re: Memorys

    wow.. all the poems i've read today are all pain..
    well, its a good poem for your feelings.
    just check out errors before posting it ok..

    i hope you're ok now though..
    just keep it cool there and be optimistic..
    see yah.. =)

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    Re: Memorys

    Thanks lol I just wrote this poem and the other along with another i'm not puttin up till later its about some stuff that happened to me with a differnt guy i was with lol but thanks
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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    WOW!!! Awesome poem Kira!!! I loved it!! And I so understand where your comein from with this.Aweseom emotion!! Keep up the great work!! ONce again Awesome!!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Memorys

    thanks shini im really glad you liked it and i know you know lol
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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    Re: Memorys

    Wow... it's amazing how you told everything that I have ever felt and what I'm thinking now... Didn't know someone in the world feels the same way as me....
    I truly like this poem, and I think it's not just because it just is so like me...
    A good work and thank You for writting it for I really enjoyed reading it!!!

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    Re: Memorys

    Quote Originally Posted by fredsboo View Post
    Thanks lol I just wrote this poem and the other along with another i'm not puttin up till later its about some stuff that happened to me with a differnt guy i was with lol but thanks
    well i cant wait. this poem brought back some memories of myself, some good and some bad, which was quite interesting. and question, did u mean to spell it 'Memorys'? or 'Memories'? lol well tell me when ur next poem is up. whoops, ur banned. o well

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