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May 13, 2008, 05:25 AM
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  kitty  | Meow, it hurts! Well i felt like writing a poem today. I personally like it despite not being the greatest thing i have ever written like i used to in the past, i never got better at writing poetry anyway. That being said, here is my poem, enjoy. All your comments are welcome, be it negative or positive. A distant memory of the past Still lurks within my thoughts In my heart as well as time has passed Love hurts some say Although, there is always a brighter day Yet, it hurts suffering that way Days and years have passed Yet, time feels like it hasn’t gone that fast In my head her memories still reside Not realizing that in my heart she has already died |
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May 13, 2008, 05:28 AM
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 Credits: 12,324 | Re: Meow, it hurts! Aww kitty.. that's sad... -hugs you- It holds a lot of emotion even though it's so short.. therefore It's not bad, It's very good actually. oO See.. -smiles- You don't write such horrible poems.
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May 13, 2008, 05:33 AM
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| kitty | Re: Meow, it hurts! Meow^^x.. Thanks for your input. Well, i have gotten soft over the last few years, so i don't write those bloody theme poems like i used to. Thanks once again, it really means a lot coming from a talented individual as yourself. |
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May 13, 2008, 07:52 AM
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Credits: 9,986 | Re: Meow, it hurts! Your better at makeing poems than I am!  It's very sad but I like the format. The flow is good and I love the color of the text! I can't see you writing anything bloody and who cares if you've gotten soft!
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