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    Meow, it hurts!

    Well i felt like writing a poem today. I personally like it despite not being the greatest thing i have ever written like i used to in the past, i never got better at writing poetry anyway. That being said, here is my poem, enjoy. All your comments are welcome, be it negative or positive.


    A distant memory of the past
    Still lurks within my thoughts

    In my heart as well as time has passed

    Love hurts some say
    Although, there is always a brighter day
    Yet, it hurts suffering that way

    Days and years have passed
    Yet, time feels like it hasn’t gone that fast
    In my head her memories still reside
    Not realizing that in my heart she has already died

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    Re: Meow, it hurts!

    Aww kitty.. that's sad... -hugs you- It holds a lot of emotion even though it's so short.. therefore It's not bad, It's very good actually. oO See.. -smiles- You don't write such horrible poems.
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Meow, it hurts!

    Meow^^x.. Thanks for your input. Well, i have gotten soft over the last few years, so i don't write those bloody theme poems like i used to. Thanks once again, it really means a lot coming from a talented individual as yourself.

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    Re: Meow, it hurts!

    Your better at makeing poems than I am! It's very sad but I like the format. The flow is good and I love the color of the text! I can't see you writing anything bloody and who cares if you've gotten soft!

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