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    the mestake

    All peaple have hopes,cares,and dreams.
    so what dos that make me.the out cast no.the unlucky no.
    the only word is the mestake.
    a misshap an unknow.
    i live only by my will and my will alone.
    i have no path or fate.
    so i do as i will and follow no one.
    love is unknone to me .
    i cant give or reaseve it.
    the mestake was born and now it will live.

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    Re: the mestake

    Spelling and capitalization errors. Hmm, I like the simplicity of this poem.
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    Re: the mestake

    I know the spelling suck.I was never that good at writing.
    i just well i dont now .
    I normaly tell storys . Ive never realy writen any. Just trying
    to do something diffrent.

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