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    Mi Corazon

    *some words are in spanish*

    My heart, my heart
    Mi corazon
    Its yours to keep forever
    How fortunate if the rain comes
    Because i know its safe and dry with you
    You are my heart, mi amoure
    Its best to leave it there
    I'll sit outside numb and cold
    Bitten by the frosty air
    I hope you'll treasure the heart i have left
    Because thats all I have to give
    To give none at all, is to never live
    I leave my all to you
    I embrace the emptyness with a smile
    In hopes to see yours too
    I laugh whenever I realize
    My love HAS no face
    locked away, shes locked away until we meet
    My heart, my heart, my heart
    You are my feelings
    Mi corazon _____________

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    Re: Mi Corazon

    I think this is really good! And I usually am not much for pomes without a steady rhyme schem so well done
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
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    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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    Re: Mi Corazon

    Thanks, i try my best! I loved your FMA one btw.

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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