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    Midnight Moon

    Under the Midnight Moon,
    everything is dark.

    Even if the light is there,
    from the Moon,
    it is still dark.

    Only because it is,
    under the Midnight Moon,
    and not under the,
    Midday Sun.

    So this is the,
    Midnight Moon,
    it is beautiful.

    Even if it is dark,
    it is still beautiful.

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    Re: Midnight Moon

    I love the moon,
    it is so enchanting!
    But it is so hard to capture...
    *Sighs*
    For many centuries has it inspired man.

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    Re: Midnight Moon

    This ones shorter then most of your others... It's good, but nowhere near my favorite of yours. I don't like the way the verses go so much. I don't know why, it just... I don't know??? I can't explain it. Still, it's not bad. Can't wait for the next!!! MORE MORE MORE! ^_^

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: Midnight Moon

    Very good poem. It was kinda romantic cause I could see me any boyfriend taking a walk on the beach with the light of the moon to guide us.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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