Woah. That's the most beautiful, expressive, and cliché-free love poem I've ever read. It could be that perhaps all the love poems I've been reading are crap, but I'd rather go with the "BlueFox1 is a great poet" idea.
I agree with your analysis of, popular, mainstream? I'm bad at finding the right words... poetry in your first stanza. Poetry (and I mean the good poems) has started to develop into a really melancholic and sobering form of expression.
I love the flow and atmosphere, and tone in this poem. Right away, the reader can tell you're experiencing some pretty lofty and enlightening feelings, and it's nice to see those thoughts and feelings expressed so clearly in this poem.
The only thing that I don't like about this poem are all the typos and grammar issues, but the pros definitely outweigh the cons. Oh, and I suggest changing "corrupt money or power" to "corruption, money, or power". "Corrupt money" didn't work out in my mind too well, and three is the magic number for writing, isn't it?