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    Re: Midnight's Playmates

    Okay then. I shall substitute it with "begin". Thank you ky-chan. And congratulations on making veterans status in just three months!

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    Why thank you and I have only been here today for 2 months exactly.

    Sweetie substitue it leave it it's your poem if it looks right to you and you like it then don't worry about it if you read in my poems only 1 of them out of all of them I have wrote did I change to make people happy.
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    Oh, so then I'll leave it then. I like the change I made better than what it was before. Sounds more sophisticated. Hmm.. I don't want to change poems to make others happy. I'd just cange them to make the poem itself seem better. And with what is there, it sounds alright to me. So it stays

    Thank you for your guidance, Ky-chan, and I hope to hear from you when I make other poems.

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    Your welcome and I'm glad that you like your poem now. Remember without criticism and readers our poems will be nothing! Keep up the work Wolf-chan and if you ever need help I'm but a pm away.
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    Re: Midnight's Playmates

    well its sertenly better than eny i can do, i like it eny thing to with the dark is aok in my book
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    Awwe, thank you koga-chan! But I'm sure it isn't "better" than what you do. You shouldn't think that way. I am glad you took the time to read it though. And yes, this poem is "dark" I suppose. But I wasn't feeling depressed or anything when I wrote it. Midnight is my favorite time of day. And I just felt like writing about it. But I can see where you get the "dark" feel of it. Thank you.

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