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  1. Jul 07, 2009 08:30 AM #1
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    Milky Way.

    Lights flash in the void
    All here; moons, sun asteroid
    Stars; mist on night's veil

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    This also appears in Asahi but is my original work. no plagairism involved.
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    Re: Milky Way.

    I was totally expecting that you wrote about the caramel goodness of a milky way candy bar! Your poem was still good even without the caramel so I'm not disappointed.

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