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    Mind

    In my mind there is chaos.
    Oh it is so sweet.
    Untill I close my eye's.
    And take a peek.
    Then i start to see what's going on
    Being chase by what i saw on tv..........
    Being chased by my memories.

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    Re: Mind


    your poems are always short and simple but yet they say so much. I like this one too... You should keep up the great work and a piece of advice in case you don't already do this or if you just want some... let the poems come to you..

    Keep up the great work and i'll be looking for more!^-^

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    Re: Mind

    short.but sweet .i love it It describes everything very well and i love it ^^ keep it↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Mind

    short but i enjoyed reading it! cant wait to read more of yours!

    sasuke is mine.

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    Re: Mind

    I love and appreciate your work more and more. You have a definative style! I can pick out your work if you poseted it anonomously amongst others. You have a method of writing that is truely yours. And because you know the right words to choose, and the right context to say them in.... your poems are very effective.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Mind

    Wow that was very good. I loved it lots.
    Keep up the good work!!

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
    ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~

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    Re: Mind

    Loved it!!!!!!!
    Short but straight to the point and full of imagination!!!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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    Thank you all. Right now Alone part 2 is in the works. Keep on checking out my poems.

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