Thread: Misery

ah good but i wood like to see it a bit longer next time
i see what you are saying in this poem and i had the same problem with my dad too

I'm sry if this is not that good of a help but:

-were is the poem going...
-it is not really in a format...
-nice at the end "That is misery my friends." ^.^

The poem is where at the beginning my dad wasn't there for me he was in the house but he was asleep on the couch when i was born they called him he said he would be right there but he just went back to sleep and now he probably won't be at my graduation everything about this poem is true. I know i am just so mad from the last email he sent me i sent him at invintaion to my graduation and he couldn't even tell me that he was proud of me it went on saying how he was wronged and stuff like that. And thank you about the end basilisk888.

T.T that is so sad, i hope everything works out for you in the end, cheering for you all the way
shouichishindo, (aka) Josh

Originally Posted by jessicacheers

The poem is where at the beginning my dad wasn't there for me he was in the house but he was asleep on the couch when i was born they called him he said he would be right there but he just went back to sleep and now he probably won't be at my graduation everything about this poem is true. I know i am just so mad from the last email he sent me i sent him at invintaion to my graduation and he couldn't even tell me that he was proud of me it went on saying how he was wronged and stuff like that. And thank you about the end basilisk888.

wow... man I'm sry about your father being such a jerk.... And he's your father >.< Good luck in your life (bad to your father >.<)

i feel for ya i can relate my dad was never there for me at all. we never really got along either... well anyway as for the poem it lacks a format as said before but i like it.