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    Misery

    The title of this poem is kind of ironic because i was born in Missouri and one of its many nicknames is Misery and this is directed to CBtay01



    Misery
    I am the most miserale kid on earth
    yet i don't know why
    I am always filled with misery and i don't know why
    My life is full but for some reason seems empty
    I feel as if i have no one
    and no one has me
    my life is misery
    nothing but pain
    as if one person standing in the rain
    Rain of Darkness that stains my brain
    I am the most miserable kid in the world
    I always wonder as time goes by
    whats the point of life
    but then i see light
    and that light is you
    and i thought i was in nothing but Darkness but i still see you
    you brighten my world with all your careing
    you show me the path that is away from pain
    and yet when you leave
    I'm in the same place again
    my life is misery
    and i don't know why
    I am the most miserable kid in the world
    His bell is tolling for you

    He wants you to come home

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    Re: Misery

    th-that is one of the best poems i have ever read... thank you *tear* i guess it does fit. I really don't know what to say.

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    Re: Misery

    this is oe of the better dedicated poems i have read infact
    i dont think i have read more than 4 that were like this and this
    one was really good adding a dedication gives it personailty and it
    seeing it from a kids point of view things can be misrable .

    very cool
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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