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    Misinformation

    No one seems to notice
    How unappreciated you are
    Look at what we've done
    Look how far we've come
    But all people hear is misinformation
    Half-truths and lies
    They don't know us
    How hard it is for us to make it each day
    All they care about is what they heear
    How we are supposedly animals
    Lusting after each other in the night
    Howling heathens in the night
    But if only they knew the trith
    Of how I so love you
    They would understand the sacrifices
    And the cries we utter togther
    But they don't care about the truth
    All they care about is their misinformation


    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Misinformation

    Awwww I hope it's not real!
    I really like it. It's a bit of love and sadness. I find it interesting. keep it up ^_^

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    Re: Misinformation

    This is really good--out of the many poems here on AO.

    Lusting after each other in the night
    Howling heathens in the night
    Punctuation is needed. You can describe night in a different way. Like, "Howling heathens under the moonlight."

    I love how you describe the animals as howling heathens.
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    Re: Misinformation

    Yes like rave said i hope its not real, i really like it i find ur poems very intrusting i think its due to how u add a pix to it adds a nice touch to it
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