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This poem was quite good and abit touching in some parts.
Words can't describe how I feel about this
Everything is changing
My life is coming apart
I need so stabilty
Some place to belong
I've lost what my home
Where can my heart rest now
I'm all alone
Someone please save me
You're my only stabilty
And I'm sorry I made you doubt
But I'm here
Right in your heart
Even though I am very far
Give me a place to be belong again
A place of peace
A place to rest
Its been so long since I've been with you
Makes me sick to think of the distance
I've missed you so much
I need you to heal me
I know its selfish to ask so much
And to give so little
But please
Wait a little longer
You know that I'll be with you again
But until then
Just let me say
I've missed you everyday
Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
Wow-all I can say is 'wow'
This poem was quite good and abit touching in some parts.
Words can't describe how I feel about this
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
Thank you very much for that comment. I figured I could poor out my heart here if no where else.
Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
A very touching poem, I liked it alot i think you poored your heart in to it like you wanted to and it shows. Nice poem hope to see more soon.
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wow verry good poem Neves good work. you make all of mine seem week but yet you are doing righting them like I do. great job hope to see more.
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Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
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Good poem. Sounds like you need a friend or just miss someone very special. Your poem has a lost of emotion that you can read right off of the page.
Wow... so nice, so sweet, so lovely and... so sad.... ^^ It's really a very good work, I don't think I've read a better "I miss you" poem yet... or written myself... very nice, you've truly managed to show your feelings in this one I think... great... I really enjoy reading your poems and I hope to see more (still have 3 pages!)
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