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    Missed You

    Everything is changing
    My life is coming apart
    I need so stabilty
    Some place to belong

    I've lost what my home
    Where can my heart rest now
    I'm all alone
    Someone please save me

    You're my only stabilty
    And I'm sorry I made you doubt
    But I'm here
    Right in your heart
    Even though I am very far

    Give me a place to be belong again
    A place of peace
    A place to rest

    Its been so long since I've been with you
    Makes me sick to think of the distance
    I've missed you so much
    I need you to heal me

    I know its selfish to ask so much
    And to give so little
    But please
    Wait a little longer

    You know that I'll be with you again
    But until then
    Just let me say
    I've missed you everyday

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Missed You

    Wow-all I can say is 'wow'
    This poem was quite good and abit touching in some parts.
    Words can't describe how I feel about this

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Missed You

    Thank you very much for that comment. I figured I could poor out my heart here if no where else.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Missed You

    A very touching poem, I liked it alot i think you poored your heart in to it like you wanted to and it shows. Nice poem hope to see more soon.
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    Re: Missed You

    wow verry good poem Neves good work. you make all of mine seem week but yet you are doing righting them like I do. great job hope to see more.
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    Re: Missed You

    Good poem. Sounds like you need a friend or just miss someone very special. Your poem has a lost of emotion that you can read right off of the page.

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    Re: Missed You

    Wow... so nice, so sweet, so lovely and... so sad.... ^^ It's really a very good work, I don't think I've read a better "I miss you" poem yet... or written myself... very nice, you've truly managed to show your feelings in this one I think... great... I really enjoy reading your poems and I hope to see more (still have 3 pages!)

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