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    Missing love

    I been missing you for days
    Its breaking my heart in two
    Damn I really miss you.

    I can't stop thinking about it
    Ever since we broke up that day
    We had a big arguement
    I didn't mean what I say.

    I always think about you
    Even where I always go
    I still love you
    And I only wanted you to know.

    But now since we're apart
    Why can't we just be friends?
    Talking to each other
    Our friendship will never end.

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    Re: Missing love

    ok so Hellknight, this poem is a nice and sad one, I can feel the pain eminating from it as I read it. what I think you should do is copy it, print it and then go and give it to the person that broke up with you...

    I like it becasue it is short but to the point. and it cuts through the armor of anyone.

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    Re: Missing love

    I like this poem so much, Hellknight!! Your rhyming scheme is damn near perfect and your poem was short, but powerfully sweet! ^_^

    Keep up the good work!


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    Re: Missing love

    Its a great poeme its great I really like it its detaled and caring taking it 2 the hart makes u fill it and I give u a thums up keep it up^^
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    *sobs*

    Wow,

    A very sad and a heart breaking poem...I must say

    I'm very sorry if this has happened to you , I know how you feel and I can also relate to this poem.....(A year ago)

    I hope you feel better , and this poem's way of rhyming was really nice and easy to follow.

    I hope to read more from you

    -Zainab

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    Re: Missing love

    That is very nice. It has a nice flow, almost like music lyrics. Are you a musician? Do you have more of your work on AO?

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    Re: Missing love

    This poem depicted sadness and yet the eagerness to restore what was lost... and that was the love shared in the past. MAny people, like me, can relate greatly to this poem... memories of the past wishing to return...
    I liked the way you wrote the feelings into this poem, sadness as well as blame into self... The poem is simple yet it is meaningful. I hope to see more in the future and keep up the good work.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Missing love

    this poem is awsome i can acctually feel what you was going through also liked the way you always did a rhyms on the second and last line oh and yes are you two friends now hope so keep good work up

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