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    Re: Missing love

    Hmmm a good poem... nicely written... but this stanza...

    "But now since we're apart
    Why can't we just be friends?
    Talking to each other
    Our friendship will never end."

    can friendship find its way..? To me..not in every case.. sadly *sighs* ^^

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    Re: Missing love

    wow.
    great.
    every single line brought back so many memories, it rele touched me.
    the flow was great and the way you phrased it made it that much better
    rele brought back some memories.
    keep up the good work.

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    Re: Missing love

    wow, never I thought to see another one of my poems filled with a lot of comments, and I thank you all for giving great comments on my poem, I thank you guys and girls.

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