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    AO's Demon Slayer Hexxagon Champion, Match Stick Soccer Champion Blade X may be famous one day Blade X may be famous one day Blade X's Avatar
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    Missing You

    You left, walked out of that door,
    Only seconds ago I was kissing you,
    Feeling your warm body against mine,
    Feeling your soft lips and your smooth skin,
    The memory of your eyes stay with me,
    The way you looked at me with such love,
    The love that I feel and know.

    I love the way you walk,
    Your hair flying in the back like wings,
    Your hips swung from side to side,
    I miss how you smell,
    I miss we cuddle in each other's arms,
    I always cherish the time we have together.


    You say a week but it feels like an eternity,
    Minutes seem like hours,
    Hours seem like days,
    Time is cruel to me,
    But I know that I'll see you again,
    Your face, your touch, the warmth of your body,
    The words I say when you return are of Love.
    "I love you" as we embrace each other.

    well this a poem coz my gf aint around n i miss her...T.T.... plz comment
    P.S thanks to Kat for helping me to get a few words right.
    Last edited by Blade X; Jul 07, 2006 at 09:18 AM.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Missing You

    ... poor blade-san.. missing .. his love ...
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    Re: Missing You

    I think it's impressive with the work from two person^^
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Missing You

    I think it was a good poem. I enjoyed reading it and I think it conveys a strong sense of longing!

    Just like poetry in school, yes

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    Re: Missing You

    its a good poem ^ ^ keep it up

    Thankx Pyro, for this awesome sig! ^ ^




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    Re: Missing You

    it seems we are feeling the same way.
    great poem.

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    It was wonderful. Keep up the great work.

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    Re: Missing You

    Wow This Is a fantastic Poem Great Jod Seriouly!!!!!!!

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