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Old Jul 07, 2006, 09:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Missing You

You left, walked out of that door,
Only seconds ago I was kissing you,
Feeling your warm body against mine,
Feeling your soft lips and your smooth skin,
The memory of your eyes stay with me,
The way you looked at me with such love,
The love that I feel and know.

I love the way you walk,
Your hair flying in the back like wings,
Your hips swung from side to side,
I miss how you smell,
I miss we cuddle in each other's arms,
I always cherish the time we have together.


You say a week but it feels like an eternity,
Minutes seem like hours,
Hours seem like days,
Time is cruel to me,
But I know that I'll see you again,
Your face, your touch, the warmth of your body,
The words I say when you return are of Love.
"I love you" as we embrace each other.

well this a poem coz my gf aint around n i miss her...T.T.... plz comment
P.S thanks to Kat for helping me to get a few words right.
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Old Jul 07, 2006, 09:18 AM   #2 (permalink)
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... poor blade-san.. missing .. his love ...
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Old Jul 07, 2006, 09:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Missing You

I think it's impressive with the work from two person^^
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Old Jul 07, 2006, 09:47 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Missing You

I think it was a good poem. I enjoyed reading it and I think it conveys a strong sense of longing!

Just like poetry in school, yes
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Old Jul 07, 2006, 10:37 AM   #5 (permalink)
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its a good poem ^ ^ keep it up
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Old Jul 07, 2006, 12:20 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Missing You

it seems we are feeling the same way.
great poem.
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Old Jul 07, 2006, 01:01 PM   #7 (permalink)
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It was wonderful. Keep up the great work.
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Old Jul 07, 2006, 03:33 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Wow This Is a fantastic Poem Great Jod Seriouly!!!!!!!
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