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    I don't know if this is going to ryhme, or what.... Just bare with me today. Oh, and Julia, if you read this.... I love you so much.






    I lay in bed.
    My body pillow dying by my death grip,
    as I have legs and arms locked,
    around it's "throat" and "waist".

    I hate this feeling I have.
    The feeling of dying,
    before my time,
    and that my life has been a waste.

    I am curled into a ball,
    unable to do anything but cry,
    unable to do anything but moan,
    and unable to do anything but be broken.

    I can't do anything but see your face,
    and the day simply fills,
    with sadness, and pain, and lonliness.

    I pray to God,
    and ask him why...
    and ask him when...
    and ask him if it's now I can be happy.

    Slowly,
    i weaken,
    and fall asleep,
    still tear filled.

    I only await to come here,
    so that I can be with her today.
    Without her or God....
    today would not hold enough merit,
    to keep me sane.


    By: Justin McCormick

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Awwww...honey. That was very sweet. I just want you to know that I'm always there with you no matter what. You might not see me or hear me, but I'm there with you. I love you so much and you'll be here soon, don't worry. And the poem was very good, it was strong with emotion. I love you too sweetie.
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    Poem was great! I don't care if it didn't rhyme you were letting the one you love know how you feel! The emotion of this poem came out perfect! Good Job!

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    love this awesome should never be let go and to say it with such love
    this is an amazing poem .very awesome cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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