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    Be missing you

    Tomorrow you’ll be leaving
    And I’ll be here grieving
    Tomorrow we say goodbye
    It can’t be true it’s a lie
    Tomorrow you go away
    This time you cannot stay
    Tomorrow the angels come
    Starting to feel numb
    Tomorrow you’ll be in pain
    Please don't go what have you to gain
    Tomorrow you’ll finally die
    With me just sitting by
    Tomorrow I’ll lose you
    Who’ll help me through?
    Tomorrow you’ll be at the gate
    Make sure you’re not late
    When you’re up in the clouds
    I’ll make you proud
    But remember, ever since day dawn break and gentle birth
    You’ll have me down on earth
    Up in the sky I’ll have you too
    Always, always be missing you.

    Dedicated to Amy Alimano, a good friend who never should have left..
    Last edited by FLawEdmiNd; Nov 07, 2006 at 10:12 PM.
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    Re: Be missing you

    *muses* It echos the greif of losing a loved one... *sniffs* Reminds me of a long time ago, when a friend died. Thumbs up, I'll never be able to produce such a heart wrenching poem, even when I'm down. Sorry bout your friend... :| I had to go through that before...

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    Re: Be missing you

    Aww. -tear- I can feel the emotion and enjoy the poem. The large stanza still annoys me, though.
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