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    Missing You (my first)

    I miss the sound of your voice, it's oh so clear,
    that any angel would vanish and disappear.

    I miss the way you allways says nice things to me
    and ask me questions that made me feel more... Manly


    I miss sleeping next to you, share the same bed with you,
    feeling and touching you. Will it ever be the same without you?


    So i guees this is it for me, will it ever be as it used to be...
    For you and me. Just you and me.


    So why did you run away, why did you... Throw me away.
    Now that you where everything to me, was i anyting to you?


    Just you and me, why can't everything be as it used to be...
    Just you and me

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    Re: Missing You (my first)

    nice poem you can feel his energy in this poem, really nice rhythm! cant wait to see your next one.

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    Re: Missing You (my first)

    wow that was very nice and very sad emonation and missing ...
    this poem is very great ....keep up ...
    hope to see more in next time...

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Missing You (my first)

    its almost like i can feel the emotions he was going through when he wrote the poem. two thumbs up man.

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    Re: Missing You (my first)

    Very nice. I hope to see more from you. Great job! Keep the good work up!

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    Re: Missing You (my first)

    I loved it. you can relly fell the energy and felling flowing from the poem. Its inspiring.

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