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    A Mistake Made To Late

    AS i sit here looking at your
    picutue the blade slide's across
    my wrist , its my love for you
    the pain make's it real ,truly amazing

    Love i now what that is its when you
    lie to me and say you live me, the blade
    pricks the skin and i bleed, its your love
    and i like it ,why didnt i do this before

    Hate i dont need it i have you in my heart
    and it make the pain fadeaway, the blood
    drips to the floor ,like the lie you lived in
    each embrace when you said you loved me

    Why is it that only now i se your true face\
    it make my heart stop ,the blade now find another
    place ,like you did when you said good by to me,
    wait i went to far my yes now fade and then im gone

    for those of you who know i want need to say this
    but for those of you who dont this was juust a poem
    and thee is no intentions in this at all . i went for another
    pome like this since i got alot of comments about the other i did
    hope this one startle some like the last did lol
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A Mistake Made To Late

    What a long one...but it's nice...

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    Re: A Mistake Made To Late

    lol thanks i tried to shorten it but it was hard with
    me already knowing what i wanted but i am still trying at it
    hopefully the next one want be as long but i dont know it just depends
    on hoe it comes out beasue you cant control the the words once they start
    comming out
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A Mistake Made To Late

    Wow. That was actually a bit powerful. I could actually feel the pain you went through for that. It was very good, I liked it a lot.
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    I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
    For he's the one that's heaven sent. :
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    Re: A Mistake Made To Late

    Hey Bro,

    The one makes the dark side of love appear, almost as if you love someone so much that it takes you to the brink of suicide! The emotion is awesome! I'm not so much worried about your spelling because that comes with time. I will say this if you have ever love someone so much that you thought about committing suicide this poem captures it all!

    Nicely done
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