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    Re: The moment she woke up

    Wow again nice opf you to post here! yeah that was how one of my days was! Thank you!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: The moment she woke up

    I like this one Highteckdudu it is interesting to read and well just interesting. your getting good at your writing keep it up.
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    Re: The moment she woke up

    so how often do you right poems? I dont see many of yours on here?

    Thankx Highteckdudu

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    Re: The moment she woke up

    I write poems when i am bored, or an idea comes over me, most of my poems are old though, this one is old too.
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: The moment she woke up

    thats nice, I like humor poems they are interesting, and funny and they keep me awake, this one was a mix of depressed and humorouse at the same time.

    Thankx Highteckdudu

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    Thank you! When i was little i was big into comedy! Still am some of my fav are Jeff Dunham! he is the best!
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    Re: The moment she woke up

    Ahhh... I don't even have a smilie cup!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So that's why.... I must get myself a smilie cup!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ lol

    A very nice poem again highteckdudu!!!! I really like how you write... really nice ^^ I hope to see more!!!!! keep it up! *hugs* :P

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    Re: The moment she woke up

    This is a very well written and detailed poem. ^_^

    I like how you can express feelings through storytelling. This poem reminds me of my first couple of years in high school. LOL. Walking thruogh the halls, wishing the day would end, regretting not skipping class at the park with your friends... Ahh, the good ol' days. LOL!

    Good work! This poem rocked my face off. ^_^


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