I read your poem and the idea was there. But i had found some things that needs to be revised.:
1. Peddle should be changed into petal
2. The division of ideas in every line should be arranged accordingly for the flow of the poem.
3. Punctuations in the right place is a must also.
4. The Capitalization of every first letter in each line
These are only suggestions in my own view. You make wonderful poems, keep it up.
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A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
Very nice poem. It had a few misspelled words,but it was still a good and true one.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
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Thanks so much I love it!